[lacnog] Fwd: [v6ops] new draft: draft-servin-v6ops-monitor-ds-ipv6

[Humberto Galiza]

Hi Arturo,

It´s much better now, more clear.

Cheers,

Humberto Galiza


2013/7/13 Arturo Servin <aservin en lacnic.net>

> Humberto,
>
> On 7/13/13 12:11 PM, Humberto Galiza wrote:
> > Hi Arturo,
> >
> > Reading your draft, and there are a two points that IMHO are a bit
> > confused, but in a general manner it´s very good. Congrats.
> >
> > Sec 1:
> > 1) "In the context of this memo it means
> >    that we not only need to correctly monitor our services and networks
> >    as we have done in the IPv4 world, but that we need it for IPv6 as
> >    well." --> it seems a bit confused to me...I would suggest you: "In
> > the context of this memo, it means that we should monitor our services
> > and networks running IPv6 as we have/had done in the IPv4 world.".
>     Good! Thanks, I liked a lot.
>
> >
> > Sec 2.1:
> > "That is that protocols for monitor network
> >    infrastructure such as SNMP or IPFIX can send IPv6 monitored data
> >    (e.g. the count of forwarded packets of an interface) using either
> >    IPv4 or IPv6 transport." it seems a bit confused to me...did you
> > tried to say: "which protocols used to monitor network infrastructure,
> > such as SNMP or IPFIX, can send IPv6 monitored data using either IPv4
> > or IPv6 transport?"
>     No, it is not a question. We are meaning that the data that the
> agent collects (either snmp or ipfix) is orthogonal to the transport
> (that could be ipv6 or ipv4). That is, if you monitor IPv6 MIB data you
> can send it by IPv6. Perhaps changing to:
>
> "It is important to understand the difference between IPv6 Transport
>    vs. IPv6 data.  In other words, protocols for monitor network
>    infrastructure such as SNMP or IPFIX can send IPv6 monitored data
>    (e.g. the count of forwarded packets of an interface) using either
>    IPv4 or IPv6 transport."
>
> Is it better?
>
> >
> > Cheers,
> >
> >
> > Humberto Galiza
> >
>
> Super thanks!
> .as
>
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